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It is a trand that rural residents are migrating to cities all over the world and result in population in countryside becoming smaller and smaller. I think this is a positive changing.
It is hard to deney that there are some pros to live outside city, for example, it cost less in housing and food. You can get a steady relationship with your neighborhood, moreover, you have more free time. But there are more cons if you live there. Firstly, there are less heigh quality schools, so you or your children can not get better education. Secondly, the medical condition there are weaker, people who have serious illness need to travel long distance to a good hospital, and the transport method are less developed.
Compared to countryside, there are more benefits in the city. Firstly, almost all best schools are located in city, people can get better education while live in city, from kindergarden to university. Secondly, the quality and amount of hospital are higher than those places outside city, people can get treatment easier and quicker, especially for the emergency situation, it can save more life, that is also a good choice for old people to live there. Thirdly, the transport are in a heigh efficiency, subways, buses and taxis, etc, it can save your time on the way. Fourthly, you can buy almost every things both online and offline. What is most important is that there are more chance of work.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits to live in countryside, it is better to live in city. More population in city is a positive trand.
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It is a trend that rural residents are migrating to cities all over the world, resulting in the population in the countryside becoming smaller and smaller. I think this is a positive change.
It is hard to deny that there are some pros to living outside the city. For example, it costs less in housing and food. You can develop a steady relationship with your neighbors, and you have more free time. However, there are more cons to living in rural areas. Firstly, there are fewer high-quality schools, so you or your children cannot get a better education. Secondly, the medical conditions are weaker; people who have serious illnesses need to travel long distances to a good hospital, and the transportation methods are less developed.
Compared to the countryside, there are more benefits in the city. Firstly, almost all the best schools are located in cities. People can get better education while living in the city, from kindergarten to university. Secondly, the quality and number of hospitals are higher than in rural areas, allowing people to receive treatment more easily and quickly. This is especially important in emergency situations, as it can save more lives, and is also a good choice for older people. Thirdly, the transportation system is highly efficient, with subways, buses, and taxis saving you time on the road. Fourthly, you can buy almost everything both online and offline. Most importantly, there are more job opportunities.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits to living in the countryside, it is better to live in the city. More population in the city is a positive trend.
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